Draft 2
Nabilah ; Investigator one .
Amalina ; Suspect . [Maria R Ang ]
Nabilah : Good afternoon maam . So I know you know why you're here .
Amalina : Yeah , pretty much .
Nabilah : So you claimed that you found your girlfriend's body in her room at 1000hrs and you said you wanted to send her to the airport cause she is going to california . *ahem
Amalina : You're telling me that I killed my own girlfriend ? I swear I didn't !
Nabilah : According to my records , yesterday you were the last one with her and it was and hour before she was murdered . Does that reminds you of anything .
Amalina : Hey , yeah I was with her in 2am but I didnt kill her !
Nabilah : *BANGGGG on the table * Don't you lie to me right now . This is a crisis , you're lieing to me about killing a dead woman .
Amalina : I didn't kill her .
Nabilah : How can I be so sure that you didnt kill her huh ? I've got evidence telling me that you went to her room . So what do you say for yourself ?
Amalina : I'll say I didn't kill her . What more answer do you want from me ?!
Nabilah : The truth ! I want the truth ! It will be easier for me and you if you tell the truth .
Amalina : I'll tell you the truth , I didn't kill her !
Nabilah : Liar ! Don't try to like with me right now !
Amalina : I can't take this anymore ,
Nabilah : Take what ?
Amalina : (silent )
Nabilah : Answer me Maria!
Amalina : Lying ( softly)
Nabilah : WHAT ?!
Amalina : Lying ( slightly louder )
Nabilah : Oh come on Maria , I know you can speak louder , I can't hear you ! What did you say ?!
Amalina : LYING ! (Shouts loudly )
Nabilah : Why did you kill her ?
Amalina : (starts crying ) I killed my own bestfriend cause I heard that Luise , my brother was going to do some nasty things to her , I can't let him do that just because he didn't get a certificate from an arts academy . I didn't even bare to see him hurt my best girlfriend .
Nabilah : And you killed her because of your brother . Seee , that was not hard to tell the truth wasn't it ?
Amalina : (stared at Investigator )
Nabilah : I'll thank you for cooperating with me but .. im afraid you're gonna be behind bars for now . Officers take her away .
Labels: Crime Scene Investigation

2 Comments:
Must have more elaboration on the feelings,but generally,the draft is quite interesting.
More characters could be put into the draft
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